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A Ravine Moment

March 13, 2009
By AndThisIsReal PLATINUM, Broadalbin, New York
AndThisIsReal PLATINUM, Broadalbin, New York
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Dans chaque fil il y a un debut.

A Ravine Moment

We walked hand in hand
Under the night sky
The light of the moon
Reflecting in your eyes.

The ravine was quite
And we laid side by side
Your arms were close around me
And I just couldn't hide'
That I was falling for you.

And that even if you fell
I'd still be by your side
I could just tell.

As we walked back
It started to pour
We were soaking wet and cold
But your lips were so warm.

This moment was beautiful in every way
And it was in this moment I knew
In your arms I wanted to stay.

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on Nov. 3 2009 at 2:39 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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i love this one its a beautiful description of teenage romance

on Oct. 15 2009 at 3:14 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

Beautiful! You wrote this really well, and it just flows. Love it.