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Loved or hated

November 2, 2016
By definitionoflife GOLD, Sheridan, Wyoming
definitionoflife GOLD, Sheridan, Wyoming
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Favorite Quote:
"do or do not. There is no try."
"Normality is a paved road. It's comfortable to walk, but no flowers grow on it."


(read from top to bottom)

I am hated
Never again will I say that
I have been loved my whole life
I’m not alone;
Im abandoned
Never will I accept it when you say that
You will stick with me
And
Protect me
Even though I will always protect you, you’ll
Leave me
You’ll never
Love me completely.

(now read from bottom to top)


The author's comments:

This is a reverse poem. You read it one way, then you read it the other way. 


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on Nov. 14 2016 at 1:27 pm
definitionoflife GOLD, Sheridan, Wyoming
12 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"do or do not. There is no try."
"Normality is a paved road. It's comfortable to walk, but no flowers grow on it."

Thank you. I did enjoy that. You should try to write your own. I think you'd write an amazing reverse poem, given what I've already read of your work. I will try to spice it up as much as I can. And again, thank you.

on Nov. 10 2016 at 1:16 pm
definitionoflife GOLD, Sheridan, Wyoming
12 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"do or do not. There is no try."
"Normality is a paved road. It's comfortable to walk, but no flowers grow on it."

Thank you. I will keep that in mind

Crimgym GOLD said...
on Nov. 9 2016 at 11:05 pm
Crimgym GOLD, Townley, Alabama
13 articles 7 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Magic is real. You just have to know where to find it." -unknown

This is an amazing poem! I love the layout of it! The only thing I would suggest, is using some more sophisticated words, such as despise instead of hate. Otherwise, this poem is very good.