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Stripped Bare

February 24, 2009
By AndThisIsReal PLATINUM, Broadalbin, New York
AndThisIsReal PLATINUM, Broadalbin, New York
31 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dans chaque fil il y a un debut.

Wrapped in black lace
Didn't you know you're just his toy for today?
Your beautiful mind was just his to play
& inside you always wanted more,
but knew no other way.

A break from cold metal
Between your legs
In your heart
And on that stage.

He promised you more.
And for a second you thought
Maybe he'd stay.
But it was just another one night stand
And baby this time you paid.

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This article has 4 comments.

on Feb. 4 2010 at 12:28 pm
Only,I PLATINUM, Taylorville, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
This too shall pass.

This is amazing. I've never read anything that's delt with this situation before. It's great. The imagery is very good.

on Nov. 7 2009 at 3:27 am
WrittenDestinee SILVER, Buckeye, Arizona
5 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What I do is not who I am, but if your fortunate enough to connect with who I am, you may benefit from what I do."

This is amaaazing and sad 2 say somethin i have been caught up n b4...i know thee feeling and reading this was lik experiencing it all over again...bad feeling but great poem i love it...thankz 4 thee comment on "incomplete women" it was one of my first im glad u liked it>.~CoCo

on Nov. 2 2009 at 10:58 am
Hayz~Hardcore SILVER, Johnstown, Pennsylvania
9 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"peace on earth"

Not to sound like a whore cause im honestly not iv been in this situation soo many times i was just looking for love but the guy wasnt...Btw thanks for ur comment it ment soo much too me :)

on Oct. 15 2009 at 3:17 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
26 articles 0 photos 493 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

This is another really well written piece! The emotion is intense, and the images are well created. Beautiful in a cold, bitter way.