Asleep | Teen Ink


February 17, 2009
By MeagaroniNCheese BRONZE, Mountain Home, Arkansas
MeagaroniNCheese BRONZE, Mountain Home, Arkansas
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'Just close your eyes.' he says, I feel my heart race.
His hand slowly rises, touching my face.
The feel of his fingers, the smell of his skin
Our lips finally touch, again and again.
Breathing increases, my heart rate explodes.
This feeling I have is nothing I've known.
I've fallen in love with this one little kiss,
Sensation able feelings of passion and bliss.
Time seems to stop, enthralled by romance.
The burning fire of love, leaving me in a trance.
I don't want this to end, I pray that it lasts.
But to my remorse, it's all fading fast.
Nothing is ever quite what it seems,
I open my eyes, now awake from a dream.

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on May. 15 2010 at 8:41 pm
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD, San Clemente, California
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Favorite Quote:
“I could give up, I could stay stuck, or I could move on, So I put one foot front of the other, No no no nothing’s gonna break my stride, “ –David Archuleta (The Other Side of Down)

same here! You are awesome and keep writing!

Sarbear GOLD said...
on May. 15 2010 at 8:15 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

i love the ending, i didn't expect it and it tied it up nicely. great job once again and keep writing!!


Meago GOLD said...
on Apr. 23 2010 at 6:22 pm
Meago GOLD, Spring City, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
How come when you need something the most- that's the time when you have to fight the hardest to receive it?

I love your poems! They're wonderful and I can relate to every one of your pieces. =D