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Yesterday's Tomorrow

February 21, 2009
By Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
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i'm here to see another day
to save another life
to fix all that's broken
never say goodbye
i try and try
and never win
but i know that today is the day
that i will succeed
i will win
you will be proud
and everything will go on about
it's like nothing ever happened
that it was all make believe
it's all right in front of you
why can't you see
close your mind
open your heart
and then, then you will see


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lovevball said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 4:56 pm
lovevball, Middletown, Maryland
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here it is : http ://teenink .com /poetry/free_verse/article/177425/I-Am-the-Dawn-of-the-Universe/

lovevball said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 4:55 pm
lovevball, Middletown, Maryland
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http ://teenink .com /poetry/free_verse/article/177425/I-Am-the-Dawn-of-the-Universe/

lovevball said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 4:54 pm
lovevball, Middletown, Maryland
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yeah well like i said it told me that it was already accepted. and when i go to my works it tells me that people have rated it and viewed it. i will copy and paste the link so you can see it.

on Feb. 24 2010 at 12:15 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments
Yeah it can be annoying lol. i used to check everyday to see if they had been posted

on Feb. 24 2010 at 9:00 am
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

It does take forever for them to accept!!!! I have to agree on that one!!! lol

on Feb. 23 2010 at 9:12 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments
how.? ughh so much homework

on Feb. 23 2010 at 7:36 am
abstractminded GOLD, Beaumont, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
when life throws you lemons....throw back grenades

kinda sorta

lovevball said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 3:12 pm
lovevball, Middletown, Maryland
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oh.. it said that it was posted and other people have already read it and rated it.. how did you try to find it? because if you just click on my name then it should be there..

in this poem, i just really like how it ends, and just the whole thing is a really great message for life. :)

on Feb. 22 2010 at 2:42 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments
read the poem i made impossible to answer.. idk why but not al of my poems shw on my screen only like 1/2 and they all have been accepted. DO you know how to fix that.?

on Feb. 22 2010 at 2:36 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments
WOW thats a long time ive been writing for about 3 years or more lol.! Do u draw.?

on Feb. 22 2010 at 9:55 am
abstractminded GOLD, Beaumont, Texas
17 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life throws you lemons....throw back grenades

for about 5 years

on Feb. 22 2010 at 9:14 am
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments
hahah okay :) so how long have you been writing?

on Feb. 22 2010 at 7:27 am
abstractminded GOLD, Beaumont, Texas
17 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life throws you lemons....throw back grenades

not yet i will and u do the same for me and tell people and rate them ok

on Feb. 20 2010 at 1:50 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments
i went to check it out and there aren't any writings if u just submitted it, it takes like 2 weeks for them to accept it

on Feb. 20 2010 at 1:49 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments
Thanks yeah ill be sure of it :) What do u think is so great about this one.?

lovevball said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 8:42 pm
lovevball, Middletown, Maryland
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I mean what you think of it or if there is anything i can do to improve*

lovevball said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 8:41 pm
lovevball, Middletown, Maryland
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This is absolutely amazing!! i really really like it! Could you look at my poem "i am the dawn of the universe" and tell me what you think o if there is anything i could do to improve. :)

on Feb. 19 2010 at 2:35 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments
have u read my new ones.?!

on Feb. 19 2010 at 8:02 am
abstractminded GOLD, Beaumont, Texas
17 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life throws you lemons....throw back grenades

yesterday's tommorrow

on Feb. 18 2010 at 2:45 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments
thanks i will :) which one of my poems is ur favorite.?