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EMOTINAL POEM

November 19, 2008
By Anonymous

Emotionally hurt everyday waiting for someone who only thinks they can help you but they cant

Mainly trying too be someone every body wants you too be but you know that you could never measure up the expectations

Outgoing too get attention they may never give you because too them your not worth it but you really are

Trying too understand why you don’t fit in with all of the so called cool people so you want too change you are

Insecure of everything you want too and your life because you think it means nothing and it would be better if you were dead

Overwhelmed with all these different feelings and confusion about life, friends, family and hurting yourself

Numb your body just feels like its losing feeling like there’s no escape its like there is no end too the pain and hurt

All you feel is alone it feels kind of like no one loves you no one wants too be around and no one will ever feel how you feel

Living a lie that people can try too fix but they really can’t but everybody says ”Oh I feel your pain” but they really don’t know why we do the stuff we do is because of what’s happened too us

So people need to stop saying that they feel our pain when they really don’t know what its like too be on the outside and not being excepted by others we want you too know you cant help us we have too help our self’s… and we will shortly figure it out for our self’s and we do not need your sympathy!!

The author's comments:
WHEN I WROTE THIS PIECE IT JUST SEEMED LIKE THERE WAS NO END TOO THE HURT!! ALSO LIKE NO ONE WANTED TOO BE BOTHER WITH HOW I FELT BUT I KNOW IM NOT THE ONLY ONE WHO FEELS LIKE THIS EVERY BODY SAYS THAT THEY KNOW WHAT ITS LIKE AND THEY DONT SO HERES A POEM TOO EVERYBODY WHO FELT THAT WAY OR STILL DOES I JUST WANT YOU TOO KNOW I DO KNOW WHAT IT FEELS LIKE BUT I DO!!
~KAYLA~

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lily123 said...
on Dec. 21 2008 at 3:49 am
all i can really say is day kayla ur rite everybody doesn't feel ur pain.... but they yry to so they can help you out

gr33ndaze said...
on Dec. 20 2008 at 6:58 pm
"too" is used incorrectly everywhere except once and its "ourselves" not "our self's". sorry but i think that poem was terrible grammar wise and not very good all around. keep writing though.

arista said...
on Dec. 20 2008 at 8:26 am
i totally agree with you. no one really knows what you're experiencing unless they've been in that same situation... and most of them haven't. You're a great writer!

*animegirl* said...
on Dec. 19 2008 at 9:53 pm
thanks- i needed that