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Someone anyone, listen....

December 1, 2008
By annkaykay2011 DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
annkaykay2011 DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
75 articles 11 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am who I am, sorry, no changes."

I'm falling....
Down, down the well of insanity.
No way to escape....
No way to climb out!
Don't keep me in here!

I'm falling deeper....
and deeper...
in the water called love.
It's swallowing my breathe and taking my choice!
My reason!
What am I doing!?

I'm falling in love...
Help me...
I have been broken into two seperate parts.
I've been broken into two seperate loves...
I cannot have both, unless I beg for it.
I can't choose one...
because I will definetely go insane!
Help me!
Listen to me!
Don't fight!
What am I doing...?
The water has stained my flesh, colored it like a new budded rose.
The warmth of it has brought me.
The pain it has now caused!
Help me!
Someone listen to me!
I must tell someone, anyone!

I'm falling deeper...
I'm drowning...
No one way out...
I can't stay sane any longer but!
...someone listen to me...
What must I choose?
Who shall I choose?
Have you trapped me in this stone, water filled well for a reason?!
Tell me that reason!
Help me...

I'm falling...
no one listened...
I always listened to everyone...
why won't they listen to me?
I give up, my heart cannot choose.

I love...them...both...
and I'm falling deeper and deeper,
drowning me into the love they have gave me.
I cannot have them both,
am I sure.

I'm falling...
just please...
oh please can someone listen to me?
Can me...choose?

The author's comments:
I listened to the advice from one of my commenters, and here's the tryout :)!
I can't choose one or the other,
and believe me, its alot harder than you think...

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on Sep. 4 2009 at 7:57 pm
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
4 articles 4 photos 376 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

Awesome, love how she was having difficulty chosing, which we all face one time or another.