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The Echo

March 17, 2014
By Mister_J PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
Mister_J PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Captain, I wish to report a mutiny. I can name fingers and point names." - Captain Jack Sparrow


A loud noise bursts out,

Rolling over the mountains,

Which stood tall and grand.

It rolls back again, the same sound.

An echo I heard today.


The author's comments:
This is called a tanka, similar to a haiku, but the syllable pattern goes 5-7-5-7-7. This is one poem in my collection of five poems called "Sound".

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