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Again

January 1, 2014
By Dillie PLATINUM, New Bethelehem, Pennsylvania
Dillie PLATINUM, New Bethelehem, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"No man ever steps in the same river twice, for it's not the same river and he's not the same man." - Heraclitus


Do whatever you want,
Do whatever you please,
But if you love me,
Promise you won't leave.

In this empty house,
Can we call it a home?
Just do what you need to,
But don't leave me alone.



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on Jan. 6 2014 at 9:22 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

It's like if you add the title word to the very end of the poem, it all just makes sense. It's cool. I'll try it sometime. (:

on Jan. 4 2014 at 10:51 am
Dillie PLATINUM, New Bethelehem, Pennsylvania
38 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No man ever steps in the same river twice, for it's not the same river and he's not the same man." - Heraclitus

Thank you very much(: I actually struggle to come up with titles, so that means a lot. 

on Jan. 4 2014 at 1:15 am
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
72 articles 0 photos 860 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

Deep, heartfelt, chilling. I love the relationship of the title and the poem. Really cool, actually. Nice job. (:

on Jan. 3 2014 at 10:47 pm
Shahrier PLATINUM, Colma, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm a river that no longer flows" - a friend
"when the people lead, leaders follow" - Gandhi

that was deep. amazing poem. relatable. 5 stars