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Life Rearranged

November 12, 2013
By Kayla98 SILVER, Kalispell, Montana
Kayla98 SILVER, Kalispell, Montana
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In the dark

Covered in shadow

Stop my heart

We are hollow

We’ve been exposed

Tomorrow doesn’t matter

So easily disposed

Cold as casper

Mind has been changed

Hope has been given

Life rearranged

My story has been written


The author's comments:
I used a rhyme scheme of a,b,a,b c,d,c,d e,f,e,f. After the eighth line there is a sudden turn, just as in sonnets.

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on Nov. 15 2013 at 6:27 pm
Great job.

on Nov. 15 2013 at 11:56 am
_WritingLover_0903 BRONZE, Oviedo, Florida
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"Be the change you want to see in the world."

Amazing job!