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Immortal Creature of the Night

October 1, 2008
By e.nadeem PLATINUM, Karachi, Other
e.nadeem PLATINUM, Karachi, Other
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Cold blood staining your face
Mirroring my horror
Your fangs sinking in with grace
Licking the blood with fervor

I wonder if my last sight
In the mortal life
Should be the treacherous moonlight
Encouraging of your bloody strife

Soon I’ll be a part of thine
Vice immortal world
Will have crossed a deadly line
Rendering my fears unfurled

I now look upon you
Your eager, thirsty expression
Your face is pale and blue
Though full of inhuman passion

Blood flows out of me
Only to meet your demands
I’m soon going to be
What no human understands

Fiend of the day
Monster of the night
Every innocent human shall pay
During my brutal strife

Akin to what I see
Presently in front of me
I’ll saunter upon the earth
As a devil inexorable
With vast eternal thirst

And just like I lie
Below you, faint
Choking out a unheard cry
Blood seeping darker than paint
It’s time to say goodbye
One day I’ll find myself
In your position of power
Another prey pitying herself
Will lie below me in horror

Now I feel them dilate
The sharp acute fangs
You grin down at me; eyes wide open in wait
Removing my irate bangs,
I soar high, baring my teeth
And grasping your steely hand
And feeling elite
We sauntered along; imposing and grand

Together as one
We build up our thirst
Casting shadows of shade from the sun
I wonder fervently who’s first

And as you lead me
Eagerly to my victim
I’m satisfied with what I see
And leisurely move in for the kill

I now roam the earth
A true creature of the night
Full of eternal thirst
Impatient and feverish to bite

Below me lies
A writhing human
I watch as it dies
Worthless, futile to my kind
I suck up all its blood
Causing my fangs to flood
Finally, I can fulfill my desires
As I walk prudently
Under the wrath of the vampires.

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Sammy said...
on Jan. 26 2009 at 11:15 am
woah lish, that is sooo good! rated 5 stars for it's awesomeness!

you're my number one Bish;)

Safire L said...
on Nov. 11 2008 at 12:36 am
Oh my wow. Amazing! I love love love Vampires (obsessivly) and can truely admit this is one of the best Vampire poems ive ever read.

Amanda W. said...
on Nov. 1 2008 at 1:22 am
Very well written and use of descriptive words. Good job!

DaRkShAdOw said...
on Oct. 24 2008 at 7:36 am
Surely this is amazing..u can be a great poet..infact you are...!!this poem rox!!i love it..its as if a real vampire wrote it!

aizah said...
on Oct. 3 2008 at 8:08 am
i rated this 1 a five star cuz i like this 1...