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Dragon

March 20, 2013
By GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
170 articles 122 photos 391 comments

I made a dragon out of string,
A tiny, wiggling, writhing thing,
I blew upon it and it stirred,
It shook itself and then it roared.



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GreyGirl ELITE said...
on Mar. 29 2013 at 6:50 pm
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
170 articles 122 photos 391 comments
Thanks :) :)

GreyGirl ELITE said...
on Mar. 29 2013 at 6:49 pm
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
170 articles 122 photos 391 comments
Thank you very much :)

Mckay ELITE said...
on Mar. 29 2013 at 4:05 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

The second line contains beautiful alliteration. The whole poem however contains vivid imagery that comes to life like your dragon.

on Mar. 28 2013 at 10:59 pm
monkeymorgan BRONZE, Middlebury, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Fair means that everybody gets what they need and the only way to get what you need is to make that happen yourself." Rick Riordan

Very nice I could really picture the dragon coming to life. It's nice and short and just awsome, nice job.