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BeSt FrIeNdS FoR LiFe

January 21, 2013
By AloneandFree SILVER, Williamston, South Carolina
AloneandFree SILVER, Williamston, South Carolina
5 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
Rise above the storm and you will find the sunshine.
-Mario Fernandez


its hard not having your bff around
one who listens and walks with you through the pasture
they may not understand you but they listen

You used to saddle up and ride as you did that you talked,they neighed in reply
You'd cry, they'd put their head on you as if to say its okay I'm here

where is that friend now
in anothers pasture,waiting, wondering
when will you be back,when will i get to talk to you

please,come back
you head back,saddle up,and ride
you talk and they neigh

you laugh,they smile back
but its not the same

its different,you've changed,they've changed,pretty soon you both have to move on to bigger and better things

You both go for one last ride
you talk about whats been going on
then you say goodbye

As you cry,she walks to you
lays down next to you
as if to say go ahead lean on me

you lean on her and cry
soon you realize you have to go
but you stay one last night
in the morning your horse has left

you yell one last goodbye
walk through the gate
and don't look back


The author's comments:
i have had to leave 3 of my bffs behind i only get to see them when we go to the pasture. which is hard because their my family

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on May. 26 2013 at 2:39 pm
TanviKusum DIAMOND, Gurgaon, Other
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Favorite Quote:
All men who have achieved great things have been great dreamers.
Orison Swett Marden

"The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say, but what we are unable to say." - Anais Nin

we speak in hushed voices so as to not wake our memories

Loved the poem. Good job :D

on May. 26 2013 at 2:26 pm
AloneandFree SILVER, Williamston, South Carolina
5 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
Rise above the storm and you will find the sunshine.
-Mario Fernandez

thanks scribbleaway and linkin park im a human not a cow 

on Jan. 27 2013 at 11:48 am
LinkinPark12 PLATINUM, Lincolnshire, Other
45 articles 1 photo 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
Work like you don’t need money, love like you've never been hurt, and dance like no one's watching. ¦ I like change - but only when everything stays the same.

I'm not to sure on this :/ Are you actually a cow? Because I got a bit confused with the pasture and stuff.. What about the saddling? I don't understand that. This is just a personal comment, but poems with no grammar annoy me (must be OCD)!   But I like the message of the poem :) It's quite emotional towards the end as well.

on Jan. 27 2013 at 11:46 am
Scribbleaway. BRONZE, Karachi, Other
4 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
Paper is more patient then people. Anne Frank
“It doesn’t matter. I have books, new books, and I can bear anything as long as there are books.”
“Sometimes I think books are the only friends worth having.”
“Fill your paper with the breathings of you
“Tears are words that need to be written.”

Amazing poem. Keep it up.