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Delicious Days MAG

December 31, 2012
By Sam_Dawn_Richi SILVER, Augusta, Georgia
Sam_Dawn_Richi SILVER, Augusta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass. It's about learning dance in the rain." -anonymus


Lick up the cloudy sky. Mix the stars
with your finger.
Get a whip of sugar-coated moon cookies.

Get a crunch of salty sun chips.
Get a blue shake of the sun-baked sky-lake.
Get a slurp of the sky. Get a sprinkle of chocolate stars.
Loud-cloud-ice-cream dream.
Whipped-cream, for ice-cream.

Every savory spoonful lick, oh so rich,
end it quick.
Dance with the man in the moon,
Sleep with stars that come so soon,
Laugh with the sun, cry with the clouds.
Rejoice with the day and the night sounds.


The author's comments:
This was going to be a free-verse poem, but kind of melted into rhyme in the middle.

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on Aug. 14 2013 at 3:36 pm
Sam_Dawn_Richi SILVER, Augusta, Georgia
9 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass. It's about learning dance in the rain." -anonymus

Thanks Ani for commenting! I can't wait for you to post more of your stuff! fire in her eye is AWWWesome:)

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on Jul. 30 2013 at 7:23 pm
lazania BRONZE, Augusta, Georgia
1 article 5 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon, because even if you miss, you'll land among the stars

WOW Richi! This poem is great! Love it! CAnt wait to read the rest of your work! BFFS Forever Ani

on May. 5 2013 at 8:39 pm
Sam_Dawn_Richi SILVER, Augusta, Georgia
9 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass. It's about learning dance in the rain." -anonymus

Thanks SounthernGal. Such poems do stir up hunger. :) Can't wait to read your future work!

on May. 5 2013 at 1:18 pm
AnotherSouthernGirl BRONZE, Augusta, Georgia
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Shoot for the moon, and if you miss, you'll land amoung the stars."

Nice job Sam ;). This poem definitely deserves to be published. I love the alliteration and all the description of food- makes me hungry. 

on May. 4 2013 at 5:06 pm
Sam_Dawn_Richi SILVER, Augusta, Georgia
9 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass. It's about learning dance in the rain." -anonymus

Thanks Laugh-It-Out! I will totally take a look at your stuff. You made my day. :)

on May. 3 2013 at 7:34 pm
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light" --Dylan Thomas

Aweome!!! I love te food (its a good thing im eating dinner) Amazing, and congrats on making the Magazine (something i have yet to do) Awesome, loved every aspect. I wrote a poem about food sort of: its called Burnt Anger. Would love some fedback since your the obvious expert! Keep rockin  

on Jan. 7 2013 at 8:37 pm
Sam_Dawn_Richi SILVER, Augusta, Georgia
9 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass. It's about learning dance in the rain." -anonymus

Hahaha :) Thanks.

on Jan. 7 2013 at 6:01 pm
In_Love_with_Writing GOLD, Easton, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me." Phillipians 4:13

I really really liked this. I truly did. It was sooo good :) It also made me hungry. Where's my cookie stash again? . . .