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Death Of Me

September 20, 2012
By InvisibleShadow BRONZE, Buckeye, Arizona
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&quot;Happiness is a conscious choice, not an automatic responce.&quot;<br /> -Mildred Barthel

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I sit here as a tear falls from my eye, I've been through this before but it's hard not to cry, Staring up at the sky I can't help but wonder why..?

You said forever more like never, I guess we weren't ment to be together.

The pain ends here and now, watch me if you want to know how.

One shot now I'm dead, Don't you wish it was you instead?

In a world like this I'll never be missed, Don't press your luck with a wake-up kiss.

I'm dead and all the pain is in your eyes, Welcome to my paradise.

© Christina G., Bedford, NH

The author's comments:
This poem is very emotional and It contains some very strong emotions that can be taken the wrong way. When I wrote this poem, I had no reason to actually write it. Sure I was upset about me and my boyfriend breaking up but this poem doesn't describe the way I felt at all. This poem just came to me. It mean that I didn't kill me. I killed the person who I used to be. The person that they wanted me to be.
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Llyxomisacutie SILVER said...
on Oct. 1 2012 at 6:43 pm
Llyxomisacutie SILVER, Gilbert, Arizona
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&quot;A steaming cup of Hot cocoa can make just about any day a little sweeter~&quot;

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Hey, Shadow.  I got your message and so I read the poem like you asked. Personally I love your tone and presentation. It's very morbid and dark but good. :)
Llyxomisacutie SILVER said...
on Sep. 26 2012 at 4:17 pm
Llyxomisacutie SILVER, Gilbert, Arizona
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&quot;A steaming cup of Hot cocoa can make just about any day a little sweeter~&quot;

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Wow, that was really lovely and dready~ I loved it all the same. - Moe