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My Amie

September 3, 2012
By AlmostNormal SILVER, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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AlmostNormal SILVER, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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" All is far in love and war"

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She was torn away
Her life was to short
She refused to stay
It was her final resort

She left me asking why
She never though of the price
I never got goodbye
Nothing to suffice

She runs through my mind
How could I have been so blind?
Forever she will be
My one, my only Amie

She chose to die
I am left to cry

© Jennae P., Kennewick, WA

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ailurophile BRONZE said...
on Sep. 30 2012 at 11:32 pm
ailurophile BRONZE, 20 Minutes From Everything, North Carolina
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This is really beautiful, in a sad, tragic way.
AlmostNormal SILVER said...
on Sep. 11 2012 at 5:52 pm
AlmostNormal SILVER, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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&quot; All is far in love and war&quot;

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Thank you so much!
remzy_1123 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 11 2012 at 9:52 am
remzy_1123 BRONZE, Baltimore, Maryland
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this was so sad but sweet u got talent
AlmostNormal SILVER said...
on Sep. 10 2012 at 5:20 pm
AlmostNormal SILVER, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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&quot; All is far in love and war&quot;

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It was My girlfriend, i will most deff. check your out, Thanks for the comment!
stupendousman BRONZE said...
on Sep. 10 2012 at 3:40 pm
stupendousman BRONZE, Peoria, Arizona
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I really like your poem; it has a lot of emotion. i'm not much of a poet, but might i suggest adding a little bit more literary devices. please rate and comment on my work! i would really appreciate it! :)
writer3499 GOLD said...
on Sep. 10 2012 at 3:20 pm
writer3499 GOLD, New Bedford, Massachusetts
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&quot;it&#039;s impossible to live without failing at something, unless you live so cautiously that you might has well not have lived at all-in which case you fail by default.&quot;<br /> -J.K.Rowling

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WOW thats really sad!  It's beautiful and I loved it and if this actually happened I am sooo sorry! It must be awful to be in your shoes...but if you wouldnt mind cheking out some of my work I would really appreciate it!