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December 11, 2011
By enc@geLoves BRONZE, Columbia, South Carolina
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enc@geLoves BRONZE, Columbia, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Let not the world decieve thee with its beauty."

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The whole world shook
But yet I stayed by your side
But you were so stubborn
That you turned to the world

Before you turned to me
So I shook the world
To get rid of all the
People who were untrue

To you
It's ironic, actually
Because when I did that
You were stuck with me

So you ran
You couldn't believe
That someone like me
Could love someone

Like you
It's true that you defiled
Yourself
But even a girl defiled

Is a girl loved
So be loved
By me

The author's comments:
I got my inspiration from when God confronted Isarel as being a prostitute, but even then he proclaim his love for them.
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jkilmer SILVER said...
on Dec. 25 2011 at 11:01 pm
jkilmer SILVER, Washington, District Of Columbia
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When I am dead, I hope it may be said:<br /> &quot;His sins were scarlet, but his books were read.&quot;<br /> &quot;Declarations of love amuse me, especially when unrequited.&quot;<br /> &#039;Pity is a useless emotion.&#039;<br /> &#039;Read. Breathe. Relax.&#039;

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I liked it. I don't know many stories from the bible, that one included, but I know of it and your poem was nicely written.
Angel_Writer GOLD said...
on Dec. 25 2011 at 12:10 pm
Angel_Writer GOLD, Chillicothe, Ohio
14 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;God didn&#039;t take me from you, he only took my hand.&quot;

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I like it. You are learning to create the flow in your words, as I am myself. Keep writing, and you will become better.
Znathan GOLD said...
on Dec. 23 2011 at 5:29 pm
Znathan GOLD, Lima, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Of course it is happening inside your head, Harry, but why on earth should that mean that it is not real?<br /> -Dumbledore

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This is amazing. I would suggest you change the last 3 lines a bit, they don't taste as well as the rest of the poem. But even if you keep it this way, it's a great poem. Congrats.
enc@geLoves BRONZE said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 8:42 pm
enc@geLoves BRONZE, Columbia, South Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Let not the world decieve thee with its beauty.&quot;

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Thanks a lot!!!!
Loftus GOLD said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 7:17 pm
Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
11 articles 1 photo 88 comments

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&quot;You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You&#039;re on your own, and you know what you know. And you are the one who&#039;ll decide where you&#039;ll go.&quot; -Dr. Seuss

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Really nice! Good meaning behind it as well. I don't know many stories from the bible, but this is one I knew so I was quite delighted with your poem! Great job!
enc@geLoves BRONZE said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 2:43 pm
enc@geLoves BRONZE, Columbia, South Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Let not the world decieve thee with its beauty.&quot;

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Awww! Thanks.
readlovewrite SILVER said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 12:27 pm
readlovewrite SILVER, Greensboro, North Carolina
7 articles 1 photo 58 comments

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&quot;Be quick to listen, and slow to speak, and even slower to judge.&quot;

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This is amazing.  I read it twice through and I thought I understood it at first....But it is like reading Shakespeare - you read it once and it means one thing, and then you read it once more and it is like the poem has a whole new meaning.  This is really strong, and I really like how you broke up your lines and stanzas (especially the first three or four).  Keep writing, this is really good!
enc@geLoves BRONZE said...
on Dec. 19 2011 at 9:23 pm
enc@geLoves BRONZE, Columbia, South Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Let not the world decieve thee with its beauty.&quot;

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Thanks that really means a lot.
lilmartz PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 19 2011 at 8:44 pm
lilmartz PLATINUM, Perrysburg, Ohio
40 articles 5 photos 163 comments

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Live Life Like A Party That Never Ends

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Wow. I can't believe I'm saying this but this has to be the best poem on this website I have ever read. For once, I can honestly say there is nothing that needs to be changed. The only part that maybe could use a little bit of work are the last 2 lines. They seem a little weak and generic, but maybe in time something better might come to you. I have no suggestions for it. I love the transitions between stanzas, and I love the metaphor! Really, really great job! This should be published in the magazine for sure!