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Death Before Life Together

December 1, 2011
By scarper94 SILVER, Beloit, Wisconsin
scarper94 SILVER, Beloit, Wisconsin
5 articles 0 photos 5 comments

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Don't stop moving forward.


Did he really mean what he said?
He said I love you, but he went away
It was the last note that I read

My heart stopped as if I was dead
Looks like I’ll lose my love today
Did he really mean what he said?

He sent me a rose that was as red as red
With the letter that he sent me in the end of May
It was the last note that I read

There I was lying in my bed
Thinking about his words this day
Did he really mean what he said?

I sat by the window looking at my shed
One more day with him I prayed
It was the last note that I read

He asked me to marry him but now he is dead
It was a terrible ending to a messed up play
Did he really mean what he said?
It was the last note that I read



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.king. SILVER said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 12:18 pm
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Nice poem ,I like the expressions !

jasso GOLD said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 9:40 am
jasso GOLD, Damascus, Other
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courge dose not always roar, Sometimes courge is a quiet voice at the end of the day saying : i will try again tomorrow

i love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i really do, i love the subject , i love the way it rhymes !!! love love

on Dec. 12 2011 at 10:13 am
Jessicaa BRONZE, Beloit, Wisconsin
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&quot;I believe that everything happens for a reason. People change so that you can learn to let go. Things go wrong so that you appreciate them when they&#039;re right. You believe lies so you eventually learn to trust no one but yourself, and sometimes good things fall apart so better things can fall together.&quot; <br /> - Marilyn Monroe

Hello, i have no idea who you are but your poem is very good. i think if you sumbit this to geeee idk a school contest i think you would really win. put more up asap.