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I Will Stand with the Night

November 22, 2011
By thedude2600 SILVER, South Plainfield, New Jersey
thedude2600 SILVER, South Plainfield, New Jersey
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I will stand with the night
To fight the man who laughs
You will never see my sight

Dropping a gavel from a great height
To execute the lawyer made of halves
I will stand with the night

Or the warrior with immense might
Even the mad hatter whose technology enslaves
You will never see my sight

The man who enjoys watching ones fright
And a dummy that controls how a ventriloquist behaves
I will stand with the night.

Even a penguin bringing an umbrella to a gunfight
Nothing will stop me, not even an injury to the back or calves
You will never see my sight.

In this city, I am the silent knight
The explosion of a bank, and a faint, hysterical laugh
I will stand for the night
And you will never see my sight.

The author's comments:
Inspiration was my extreme love of comic books and Batman being my favorite.

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anon12345 said...
on Feb. 23 2012 at 10:12 pm
anon12345, Gys Drive, California
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Favorite Quote:
"If there is a will, there's a way"- Theodore Hertzel

i like it

its really powerful, nice use of words

do you think you could look at my poems? 


on Dec. 3 2011 at 3:46 pm
sunshine7223 SILVER, Holdenville, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"Afterall, a loose screw doesn't want to need, and a hammer doesn't want to be needed." -Me

"Those who observe with their eyes closed and mouths open, are usually not as wise as those who allow their minds to wander freely." -Me

This is written very well! :) You've got talent! Nice job!!! :)

on Dec. 3 2011 at 10:32 am
thalialisset SILVER, Jamaica, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Don't Judge Its Book By It's Cover

Niceee........I love the way this piece is written........good Job......:)              check out my stuff tooo plzzzzz.?????

 


Nohche GOLD said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 8:46 pm
Nohche GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
The best revenge is success

 like how deep it is, nice job

I.N.K said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 8:37 pm
I.N.K, Hoover, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"never confuse what is impossible with what hasn't been done yet"






















-Ryan Doyle

this is awesome im glaad it rhymes it also very mysterious

 


on Dec. 2 2011 at 8:26 pm
thedude2600 SILVER, South Plainfield, New Jersey
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random? lmao

on Dec. 2 2011 at 8:23 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Very interesting, I like how random it is :D Thanks for sharing!

on Dec. 2 2011 at 8:19 pm
thedude2600 SILVER, South Plainfield, New Jersey
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yeah inspiration was actually the killing joke, the dark knight returns, batman year 1, and Arkham City

TapTap SILVER said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 8:16 pm
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
8 articles 0 photos 146 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever, love like there is no tomorrow, dance like there is no one watching.

finally not an exptremley dark poem! funny inspiration but fantastic poem! really wonderful job im jelous!

izyfizy GOLD said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 9:28 pm
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
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Favorite Quote:
You all laugh because I'm different,
I laugh because you're all the same.
- Anonymous

Oh, whoops! CAPS LOCK!!!!

izyfizy GOLD said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 9:28 pm
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
16 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
You all laugh because I'm different,
I laugh because you're all the same.
- Anonymous

WHOAH! THATS REALLY GOOD!!!!

on Dec. 1 2011 at 7:54 pm
thedude2600 SILVER, South Plainfield, New Jersey
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Yeah, i'd like to read your stuff

Becca17 GOLD said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 7:52 pm
Becca17 GOLD, Belleville Ontario, Other
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Favorite Quote:
“Seven Deadly Sins:
Wealth without work
Pleasure without conscience
Science without humanity
Knowledge without character
Politics without principle
Commerce without morality
Worship without sacrifice.”
― Mahatma Gandhi

will you look at some of my stuff? I'd love some male feedback on any of my pieces.

on Dec. 1 2011 at 7:49 pm
thedude2600 SILVER, South Plainfield, New Jersey
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thank you :)

Becca17 GOLD said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 7:45 pm
Becca17 GOLD, Belleville Ontario, Other
10 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Seven Deadly Sins:
Wealth without work
Pleasure without conscience
Science without humanity
Knowledge without character
Politics without principle
Commerce without morality
Worship without sacrifice.”
― Mahatma Gandhi

You're a natural writer.