Observations | Teen Ink


August 6, 2011
By EnigmaticBeing PLATINUM, Santa Barbara, California
EnigmaticBeing PLATINUM, Santa Barbara, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Be careful what you set your heart upon - for it will surely be yours.'
James A. Baldwin

Hear the clouds as they move
Watch the fog fly away
Taste the rain as it falls on you
Feel the birth of a new day

Find the peace in the wind
Smell the freedom that surrounds you
Watch your sadness descend
Let go of all that binds you
Until your light as a feather

Now that you've escaped the land of broken ties
Listen to the sweet silence
Feel the tears in your eyes
Because you have observed the love that was once disguised

The author's comments:
I wrote this for a school auction but I was so afraid that someone would plagiarize it that I didn't submit it.

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on Nov. 29 2011 at 5:45 pm
no.name. PLATINUM, Ceres, California
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I really really like this. It's s beautiful.