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Today

May 12, 2010
By Ghostwriter92 PLATINUM, Salt Lake City, Utah
Ghostwriter92 PLATINUM, Salt Lake City, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Your life is a gift. Accept it. No matter how screwed up or how painful it seems to be. Somethings are going to work out as if they were destined to happen... As if they were just meant to be"


The Critic
There was a critic named Antoinne Ego
She had a very dainty Ego
Her superego was very high and surely it would never die
Though her id was low, it was not too slow
For when she had her meetings, she’d do her eating’s.
When Antoinne Ego had a paper,
She never said, “I’ll do it later.”
When she read some lines, and knew it was well
She’d write the writer, “This part shall dwell.”
However, if there were some lines that were bad,
She’d write, “I think you are trying to make me mad.”
When she’d e-mail the papers back,
She’d always get answers from her Mac.
Being a critic was her job
And with that, there came some sobs.
While some would say she’s been too mean
Others would say, “You are so keen.”
There was a critic named, Antoinne Ego
But to me, she’s just my Hero.


The author's comments:
A teacher inspired me to write this poem

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on Jun. 9 2010 at 1:10 pm
Ghostwriter92 PLATINUM, Salt Lake City, Utah
45 articles 1 photo 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Your life is a gift. Accept it. No matter how screwed up or how painful it seems to be. Somethings are going to work out as if they were destined to happen... As if they were just meant to be"

I must remind people that the title is The Critic, not today, but THE CRITIC.

Please don't be confused