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Silly Little Puppet

April 27, 2010
By bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”


At first it was nice, how you made me feel
I should have known that it was surreal
Whispering words so softly in my ear
Telling me everything I wanted to hear
With that longing gaze, you captured my soul
When you flashed that smile, I lost all control
You broke me down, you gained my trust
Now all my love has turned to dust
My heart turned to ashes, spread across the sea
Somehow you took a part of me
I long for your love, and still I crave you
I’m your silly little puppet, a naive fool
My legs are bound, no where to run
You pull the strings, you have your fun
My heart wrapped in chains, a haze in my head
My trust is broken, my hope is dead
As I sit helpless, my love now a curse
Emotions slowly dying, waiting for the hearse
For some reason I can’t escape your grasp
Trapped in a box you locked with your clasp
My limbs in shackles, a prisoner of love
Tortured by the deception that you’re made of
Your poisonous lies curdling through my veins
A dark cloud of denial driving me insane
I’m lured in, under your spell
Living and breathing, but going through hell
Please cut my strings, please set me free
Unlock my heart, give me back my key
Don’t play these games, please let me go
Close the curtain on this silly little puppet show...


The author's comments:
I wrote this to express how I felt after my first heartbreak...i'm sure many of you can relate to this...hope you enjoy and please comment if you like it!

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on Jun. 7 2010 at 2:20 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Thank you so much! I will be putting more up as i go =) and i enjoy ur work too so i will check up on urs 2 <3

CarolynQ GOLD said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 2:18 pm
CarolynQ GOLD, Manalapan, New Jersey
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This is soo adorable I love what it's about and I love the words you used for it! Good job and keep it up I'll be checking back to see your other poems I enjoy your work.

on May. 24 2010 at 10:21 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Thank you =D

on May. 24 2010 at 10:19 pm
faypirate23 DIAMOND, Fayetteville, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Take the road less traveled by.

one of my faves good work partner

on May. 24 2010 at 10:34 am
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

lol thanks again =)

on May. 24 2010 at 10:33 am
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

haha aww thank you =D

on May. 22 2010 at 7:29 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

but i cant cause...you know. I love the rhyming scheme and the simile metaphor things. this is really good. and i LOVE the ending. i like how you told the story. youre the best captain. 5 stars.

on May. 22 2010 at 7:25 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

youre right captain. I like this one. I love the part where your love turns to dust and your heart turned to ashes spread across the sea and how yuor trapped in a box and your limbs are in shackles and your a prisoner of love and how theres a dark cloud of denial insaning you, and i really could go on all day here.....

on May. 20 2010 at 8:17 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Thanks so much! =D

on May. 20 2010 at 8:08 pm
sunnyhunny PLATINUM, Litchfield, New Hampshire
22 articles 3 photos 329 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind."
-Ghandi

This is very, very powerful!  I felt this with you the whole time I was reading it.  Very expressive.  And once again, the last few lines are my favorite.  You really do a nice job of summing up your poems.

on May. 20 2010 at 4:36 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Thank you very much! and i really did like yours too =D

on May. 20 2010 at 4:34 pm
hollyhottell DIAMOND, Redding, California
54 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
poetry is a diary written out loud

is is soo good. i can reladt . good job......i like your work.. hope you liked mine

on May. 17 2010 at 10:52 am
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Thank you! =D

dkdhfk said...
on May. 17 2010 at 10:50 am
this peom is amazing!!!!!