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February 21, 2010
By Rainey GOLD, Dumfries, Virginia
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Rainey GOLD, Dumfries, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
I've never told a lie and that makes me a liar, I've never made a bet but we gamble with desire, I've never lit a match with intent to start a fire but recently the flames are getting out of control
- All Time Low: Jasey Rae

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People think they are fat
When they sit down things go splat
But really there is so much more
When two males see each other there’s a war
Mothers on the other hand are caring
Come close and you’ll be daring
They have humongous tusks across their face
And walk with a certain grace
Elephants have very big ears
When you make fun of them, their eyes fill with tears
They live together in a heard
To them living alone is just absurd
They sway from side to side
And have a very callous hide
And as you can see, there is a lot to say
About the big and gray elephants of today

The author's comments:
Well im shocked that they do not have elephant pictures...lol...oh well, this one will have to do without
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purplegurl523 SILVER said...
on Mar. 22 2010 at 3:29 pm
purplegurl523 SILVER, BROOKLYN, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Fists in the air, hands on your hair!" ~My math teacher

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I didn't notice it either, I was distracted by all of the good things in the poem to notice!
Rainey GOLD said...
on Mar. 16 2010 at 3:08 pm
Rainey GOLD, Dumfries, Virginia
14 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
I've never told a lie and that makes me a liar, I've never made a bet but we gamble with desire, I've never lit a match with intent to start a fire but recently the flames are getting out of control
- All Time Low: Jasey Rae

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neither did i, but my overly obsessive perfectionest friend had to point it out...lol...
ElephantGirl523 SILVER said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 1:55 pm
ElephantGirl523 SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind." -Theodor Geisel

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Still, i think it's an awesome poem. I didn't even notice the misspelling!
Rainey GOLD said...
on Mar. 13 2010 at 8:06 pm
Rainey GOLD, Dumfries, Virginia
14 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
I've never told a lie and that makes me a liar, I've never made a bet but we gamble with desire, I've never lit a match with intent to start a fire but recently the flames are getting out of control
- All Time Low: Jasey Rae

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thank you! but i did mispell herd....haha. My friend actually pointed it out to me...but i dont want other people to make fun of me like she and my dad are
ElephantGirl523 SILVER said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 9:19 pm
ElephantGirl523 SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
6 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind." -Theodor Geisel

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Here's the friend! Simply brilliant, I love the appreciation of this too often overlooked animal. Especially the first part. . . splendid! I love it!
purplegurl523 SILVER said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 8:18 pm
purplegurl523 SILVER, BROOKLYN, New York
6 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fists in the air, hands on your hair!" ~My math teacher

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brilliant rhymes! My friend loves elephants too, I'm going to show her this!