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forever to bleed

October 5, 2009
By Henny GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
Henny GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
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2.
i should have known I let you down
you were a mess
and I was never around
i lost the essence of time
i forgot you were hurting
and i was too blind
i didn't realize what you needed me to do
or maybe i just wasn't prepared to give myself to you
i guess i was not as good as you thought
& i guess you don't see what you have until you notice what you got
but I'll leave you my heart
cause that was meant for you to keep
i apologize for bittersweet love
for leaving it bent
forever to bleed.



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Henny GOLD said...
on Oct. 15 2009 at 2:28 pm
Henny GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
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thanks you guys ! more coming soon so look out for updates

on Oct. 15 2009 at 8:18 am
rebeldiamond1313kd GOLD, Franklin, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"If you look in the mirror and don't like what you see. You can find out first hand what it's like to be me!" -"The End." -My Chemical Romance

this is great. i understand the feeling in this...

on Oct. 14 2009 at 9:23 pm
MeghanMichelle GOLD, Hooksett, New Hampshire
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Amazing poem.

Jazzzy517 GOLD said...
on Oct. 14 2009 at 3:12 pm
Jazzzy517 GOLD, Meriden, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow.

this is AWSOME!!! i wish i could write dat good....

on Oct. 14 2009 at 2:23 pm
lmp416 PLATINUM, Brockton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes people write the things that they can't say." -One Tree Hill

this is really good, keep writing :)

on Oct. 14 2009 at 12:44 pm
HeavenCooley GOLD, Stillwater, Oklahoma
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wow!!!

very good!!

love it keep writing!!(:

tgir85 GOLD said...
on Oct. 13 2009 at 5:36 pm
tgir85 GOLD, Katy, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"I only put you through that test to see if you would keep the faith or give up..."

very nice. kudos! keep it up!! ^^

on Oct. 12 2009 at 9:41 pm
RhyanWoods SILVER, Glendale, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
there's always two people in every picture: The photographer and the viewer.

All I can say is wow. I love it. It reminds me of my ex. Keep it up.