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The Never Ending Storm

August 21, 2009
By Braidy BRONZE, Helper, Utah
Braidy BRONZE, Helper, Utah
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Like thick gray clouds amongst the sky
Some things begin in the simplest form,
What seems to be a small confusion
Is only the beginning of the storm.
Disagreements here and there
Fluttering through the air,
Like light rainfall drizzling away
It isn’t much of a scare.
Light rain becomes pouring rain,
As growing thunder echoes round
The storm continues lively now
But I hope it soon calms down.
Over time the sky appears brighter,
It must be fading away.
But then the lightening strikes once more
Ruining my chances for a better day
The never ending storm continues,
Thriving off of tears and hate
But through it all I will keep hope,
For after every storm a rainbow awaits.

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This article has 3 comments.

eMs23 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 22 2009 at 5:32 pm
eMs23 BRONZE, Yuma, Arizona
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This is amazing! Actually its better than amazing, right now im at loss for a better word. Love the description and the message that goes with it.

on Aug. 31 2009 at 7:26 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

i love this :) the rythym is great, and it has a very good flow. the ending is so sooo so good- it's my fave :) you explained everything in the poem that could really create a never ending storm :) love it :)

EdytD SILVER said...
on Aug. 31 2009 at 1:43 am
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
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I really like this! I think it's very interesting how you use one underlining metaphor to describe love. Great job!

Thanks for the comments!