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Make me shine

August 3, 2009
By Alice28 GOLD, Somewhere Over The Rainbow, Oregon
Alice28 GOLD, Somewhere Over The Rainbow, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
Its hard to defeat someone...who never gives up.


Empty words, every one
Nothing to fear, except a gun.
I wish on a star that something will go wrong
Wish that something will make me strong.
Wish that something will go out of line
And make me wonder.
Make me fear. Make me shine.



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on Feb. 5 2010 at 11:36 pm
BookWorm579 PLATINUM, Elk Grove, California
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Favorite Quote:
"à cœur vaillant rien d’impossible [nothing is impossible to a willing heart]" -French Proverb

That which doesn't killus makes us stronger.

Sorry if that quote was a bit cliche, but I like this poem. It rephrases the saying and makes the message a little more subtle. It's always good to know when to say something outright and when to be a little poetic about it.