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Marriage

November 3, 2021
By Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
103 articles 7 photos 1824 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)


Sad Dad walked his girl
She had tears of glee and glum
Her hand changed her life

The charming white dress 
showed the peace in the girl's mind
Her hair was no mess

Guy was excited
Which made the Dad so frightened
But he had no choice

Dad's glad for his girl
And her brand new life ahead
He wore a slight smile

The Guy's big sisters
Had planned a prank to trick them
But could not do so

The learned tester came
Looked at the Girl and the Guy
And chanted his words

Then, came out a juice,
then hugs, talks and rushes 
Soon they headed out

A fancy car arrived
Went in the girl and the guy
life is shining new


The author's comments:

My name is Afra. I was born on the 29th of December. I am a Sri Lankan currently residing in Kandy, Sri Lanka. I dedicate my poem to My Dad, Mom, Ameer Uncle, Paji Aunty, my Granny Janufa Reyal, Khaniz Umma, Soodha Umma, Awrah, Amdhi, Aara, Sathvika and My late Grandpa Rahmath Appa. If they weren't there, my poem won't be here. And I also dedicate this to all the readers of Teen Ink. 

I chose to write about marriage because due to Covid, we are not able to attend marriage ceremonies. In a marriage, all relatives get together and have an interaction which never happens everyday. I really miss those good old days before Covid and I do wish that this pandemic would end soon. Stay safe, dear readers.


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Afra ELITE said...
on Sep. 21 2022 at 9:35 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
103 articles 7 photos 1824 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

@_ITSJEMMY, well, not many of my poems are chosen for editor's choice either...But, well, I remember that I write only because it makes me happy...
Your pieces are wonderful...Keep writing until the end, buddy!!! 😊😊😊

_ITSJEMMY GOLD said...
on Sep. 20 2022 at 4:56 pm
_ITSJEMMY GOLD, Lagos, Other
14 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
IF YOU CANT LOVE ANYONE AT LEAST LOVE YOURSELF, YOU ARE WHO YOU ARE DONT LET ANYONE CHANGE THAT, YOU ARE LIKE THE STAR THAT SHINES AT ITS APPOINTED TIME

i even wrote a poem cause i was inspired but they have not yet approved it . i am still waiting

_ITSJEMMY GOLD said...
on Sep. 20 2022 at 4:39 pm
_ITSJEMMY GOLD, Lagos, Other
14 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
IF YOU CANT LOVE ANYONE AT LEAST LOVE YOURSELF, YOU ARE WHO YOU ARE DONT LET ANYONE CHANGE THAT, YOU ARE LIKE THE STAR THAT SHINES AT ITS APPOINTED TIME

hi, you where the first ever person to comment on my poem. when i saw it i was so happy. it inspired me to post more of my poems. I'm in silver now and I'm really proud of myself. my poems have not been chosen for any editors choice like yours but I believe ill get there one day. i just want to let you know that I'm really thankful. that one comment helped me a lot.

Afra ELITE said...
on Jun. 13 2022 at 11:37 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
103 articles 7 photos 1824 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

@animeshpradhan, thank you...🍃🍃🍃

on Jun. 13 2022 at 11:11 am
animeshpradhan GOLD, Faridabad, Other
11 articles 0 photos 2 comments
This is a really good poem!!

Afra ELITE said...
on Apr. 23 2022 at 4:30 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
103 articles 7 photos 1824 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

@SaltOfTheSea, thank you...💫💫💫

on Apr. 19 2022 at 5:39 am
SaltOfTheSea SILVER, Shanghai, Other
6 articles 0 photos 2 comments
This is beautiful!

Afra ELITE said...
on Mar. 11 2022 at 4:06 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
103 articles 7 photos 1824 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

@maemae24, Thanks for commenting...🎀🎀🎀

on Mar. 10 2022 at 7:28 pm
summerchild GOLD, Chandler, Arizona
11 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Some of us have been through so much that even something good feels like a set up.”<br /> -Anonymous

This is beautiful, Afra! It really means a lot during this time and I hope that you and your family are well. Continue writing- you’re amazing!

Afra ELITE said...
on Feb. 24 2022 at 12:57 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
103 articles 7 photos 1824 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

@LillyG, Thank you...🎁🎁🎁

LillyG BRONZE said...
on Feb. 23 2022 at 3:57 pm
LillyG BRONZE, Battle Ground, Washington
2 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
“But I, being poor, have only my dreams;<br /> I have spread my dreams under your feet;<br /> Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.” <br /> - William Butler Yeats

This is beautiful!

Afra ELITE said...
on Feb. 20 2022 at 3:03 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
103 articles 7 photos 1824 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

@IzzyMossie137, thank you...💛💛💛

on Feb. 20 2022 at 12:57 am
IzzyMossie137 GOLD, Aurora, Illinois
11 articles 1 photo 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is a journey I don't have a map for."<br /> -Delta Goodrem-

This is a beautiful poem. One of my sisters got married and I guess this was everyone's feeling at that time.

Afra ELITE said...
on Feb. 11 2022 at 2:01 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
103 articles 7 photos 1824 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

@Dragonrider16, Thank you so much for commenting...And I'm sorry if I made you cry...😃😃😃

on Feb. 10 2022 at 10:43 am
Dragonrider16 PLATINUM, Omaha, Nebraska
20 articles 4 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
we are all born with a divine fire in us. our effort should be to give wings to this fire.

OMG so emotional I love it and how you put emotion into your writing, I started tearing up a little bit, when I read your poem!

Afra ELITE said...
on Feb. 7 2022 at 8:38 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
103 articles 7 photos 1824 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

@LolaQueen526, Thanks...😊

on Feb. 7 2022 at 7:45 am
CaliFranceGurl648 GOLD, San Diego, California
11 articles 1 photo 125 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I am a California girl, born and raised, so flip-flops and cutoff shorts are my go-to look."<br /> <br /> – Meghan Markle

@Afra, after reading this much of your poems, I came to your first one and I'm so flabbergasted due to your talent. Well-done, gurl.🎀
Absolutely love it!

Afra ELITE said...
on Jan. 16 2022 at 11:52 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
103 articles 7 photos 1824 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

@aalaazah1, Thank you...♡★♡

on Jan. 16 2022 at 7:50 am
aalaazah1 PLATINUM, Colombo, Other
32 articles 2 photos 153 comments

Favorite Quote:
where words fail music speaks <br /> success is a journey, not a destination<br /> <br /> when you feel your best, everybody else can feel it too - ARIANA GRANDE<br /> <br /> If you are able to look yourself<br /> in the mirror every day<br /> with the decisions that you make,<br /> that's where power starts - SELENA GOMEZ<br /> <br /> Before you judge people judge yourself - ZAYN MALIK<br /> <br /> haters will say what they want, but their hate will <br /> never stop you from chasing your dream- JUSTIN BIEBER<br /> <br /> If you follow your dreams, <br /> it means you follow your heart.<br /> if you do follow your heart, <br /> I don't think you can go wrong- CELINE DION

@Afra your poem is so obsessive and intresting,
simply its incredible

Afra ELITE said...
on Jan. 4 2022 at 10:13 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
103 articles 7 photos 1824 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

@WolfGurl Thank you so much for your wish is a rare one as I don't get much wishes from friends...
And Thank you for your appreciation too because It brightened my day...All you have to do is to be the person who you want the emotion of and then, feel the situation and just write it down and you know, edit, cut and stuff...
You too write well and I even read the book which you write the review about...
Thanks again...★★★