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Marriage
May 27, 2009
Marriage is not a game. If you think that that's a shame.
When you get married you give up the I's for us and the fuss.
Remember this God Hate Divorce.
I just want this to be enforced.
Make sure you start your marriage before you buy your first carriage.
Marriage is basically when you say i want to be be with you everyday,I'll be O-Kay until I Decay . Marriage doesn't mean 9 kids.
So don't over due, because you can't undo.
The ring is not important if you have true love.
Have true love
TRUE LOVE.
You shouldn't love for who they are, NOT because they're a star.
This is Marriage.
© Becky F., Sacramento, CA
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This article has 14 comments.
JasonsBaby GOLD said...
on Oct. 29 2009 at 12:04 pm
you did great especially since your twelve, im 14 and cant write that well, you have serious potential!!!!
AmillamissPriscilla GOLD said...
on Sep. 6 2009 at 3:41 pm
awesome! i really like what you have to say
LakeTownGirl GOLD said...
on Jun. 29 2009 at 11:49 pm
It was good. I like some of your other poems better. But you still have tons of time to perfect your writing strategies. try reading some of mine. i know they're not the best but i wrote them for my AP English class. Hope you like them
Surrealist14 said...
on Jun. 15 2009 at 12:48 am
Its good, but some of the lines dont make sense. Was it written as a rap? It has that sort of beat
Griffinwing SILVER said...
on Jun. 14 2009 at 1:47 am
PS giving your age and name on your profile isnt a safe thing, just saying.
Griffinwing SILVER said...
on Jun. 14 2009 at 1:44 am
This is what marriage should be, I agree with you. Few grammar errors but besides that nice.
singerxchick95 SILVER said...
on Jun. 13 2009 at 2:18 am
I enjoyed this. Thanks for the comment on my poem :)
sillyrabbit GOLD said...
on Jun. 12 2009 at 8:54 pm
THank you for all the compliments on my writing and good work!!
Emma
Emma
Sacred_Surrender SILVER said...
on Jun. 12 2009 at 8:05 pm
I do in fact like your poem! You kind of beat around the bush a little bit... And you might want to use a little less rhyming patterns... But it was a very good poem. :] Good job!
sillyrabbit GOLD said...
on Jun. 10 2009 at 9:56 pm
Pretty good. Though I don't think god hates divorce.. I mean when I get married I don't ever want to get divorce (as I assume no one does) but sometimes in some situations divorce is right. Of course I'm not saying you should use divorce as a easy way to get out of a relationship but when you try your hardest to get the relationship to work and the other person just doesn't care anymore then perhaps it is best to get a divorce. Divorce I think should not be used as a easy way out but as a last resort...Meaning you have done everything in your power to get the relationship to work but it isn't working.. That is what I mean.. Anyway sorry to go off like that but had to get that out of my system. Now finally I got one last thing to ask... Why did you comment on your own poem???
Beside good work!!
And keep writing!!
Best of luck,
Emma
Beside good work!!
And keep writing!!
Best of luck,
Emma
cmoney1994 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 10 2009 at 12:26 am
GREAT
cmoney1994 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 7 2009 at 10:39 pm
THIS is won of the best poem I've read from somebody your age
