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Carmel Coated Dreams

May 19, 2009
By jaynefferr SILVER, Acworth, Georgia
jaynefferr SILVER, Acworth, Georgia
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Carmel coated dreams
Not everything is as it seems
Things become different
As people come and go
Scene after scene
The movie screens show

The sounds of my passion
Are loud and rapacious
Unlike those Carmel dreams
Quietly delicious.

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