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CuTe

May 7, 2009
By AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
We choose the love we think we deserve ~The Perks


In all the chaotic confussion that surounds my spinning mind,
Ear splitting silence.
Can't think.
Can't move.
Can't take it anymore.
It's more of just a blue stage
Sometimes it's more than just a bit of pain
Sometimes it's more than a heart break
mind-
soul break.
Shattered reflections in pools or crimson
from lush bubbles that form with
a precise sick beauty,
you can't get enough.
It's numbing.
It's hard candy.
A whisper to a scream.
All in still silence
This is cute
without the E.


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on Mar. 16 2010 at 12:55 pm
Queen_of_Hearts BRONZE, Memphis, Tennessee
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you don't love yourself, then who else will?

Your poems are so unique....

justsamm. GOLD said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 2:32 pm
justsamm. GOLD, Haverhill, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
hide my face;
from my tears.
my weakest link
controls my fears.

i love your work; you do a great job cant wait till you post more =]

on Dec. 18 2009 at 11:00 am
<3inablender SILVER, Center Valley, Pennsylvania
7 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am greatly appreciative of feedback from people. It means a lot to me to know that what I have to say is actually worth a damn; to someone other than myself. And that my voice, screaming like hell, actually was heard when I feel like it's not heard.

you're writing style is extremely good. your words suck me in and don't let go. have you ever thought about what you want to do when you get older?

btw... dude... i live like right next to a-town. lol that's funny. but that's besides the point. i just ramble alot. you're writing is very very good. can't wait till you post more. lol

on Nov. 4 2009 at 9:18 am
liz maloney BRONZE, Lindstrom, Minnesota
1 article 27 photos 26 comments
your a great writer hope i can be as good as you one day your words just flow

on Sep. 21 2009 at 5:44 pm
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
37 articles 2 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
" It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. "
Albus Dumbledore


See, we really DON'T have anything to fear but fear itself!

this is amazing and beautiful. the last line is just - wow.

on Jun. 9 2009 at 7:04 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Wow! This is beautiful and cute...with the E...amazing! I loooved it!

sgrace SILVER said...
on Jun. 4 2009 at 12:00 am
sgrace SILVER, West Chester, Pennsylvania
5 articles 22 photos 18 comments
this is really good- your really talented.

it describes it perfectly, can't even begin to say

this is awesome!

on May. 25 2009 at 4:22 am
BrooklynJahnai., Burton, Michigan
0 articles 9 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do what you love, Love What You Do - Kelli Smith

why does this just make e feel all good.Hmm,i lovethis.its really great.deep,much too deep understanding of the subject.im not too concerned withwho this pretains (<---that how ya spell it?) to but its truly a piece of art.should be published!

on May. 16 2009 at 2:39 am
brooke.is.gone. SILVER, Scottsville, Kentucky
5 articles 0 photos 16 comments
I love this poem, it's like amazing? I don't even think that covers it. :)

on May. 15 2009 at 9:44 pm
Ineedthesuntorise BRONZE, Maple Grove, Minnesota
3 articles 0 photos 8 comments
Hey, this is really good work! i absolutely adore this! very imaginative! Is this about you or a friend or someone random?