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The Feel

May 2, 2009
By GreenWriter826 PLATINUM, McAllen, Texas
GreenWriter826 PLATINUM, McAllen, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
''Their fruits like honey to the throat
But poison in the blood'' - Christina Georgina Rossetti "Goblin Market"

I try to feel
The feel of touch
To touch my heart
I feel too much
The feel of death
The feel of life
How much can I feel
Till I feel just right
I hate this feeling
This feeling right now
This thing I try
To push back down
I hate the feeling
The feeling of sound
It makes my heart
Start to pound
To stop
To brake
Trying to make
Life so precious
So great
So much more
Out of mind
Out of body
Totally in sight
I try to choose the path
The path I feel
But I can’t choose
Because it doesn’t feel real
I try not to cry
Because its weakness in your eyes
So I keep the feeling in
So deep inside
But can they see
The tears I cry
The thing that runs me dry
I need to run
Run on home
Somewhere I can
Call my own
But it’s hard
I can’t see
To see past my insanity
But I will
I will feel something
Something other than
I want to feel peace
Everything till I feel
Feel my happiness
To feel my love
To feel the great sky’s above
I want to feel it

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on Jul. 1 2009 at 12:50 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

This is very beautiful. I like the feeling I get while reading this. It is absolutely amazing.

~~By the way, thanks for reading and commenting my work. I really appreciate it.