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He never will see...

April 17, 2009
By MusicL0v3r28 GOLD, Forks, Pennsylvania
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He can't see me because I'm invisible.
I'm transparent.
I smile, he doesn't see.
He doesn't see the real me only my shadow.
Like I'm wearing a cloak hiding myself underneath.
He sees other girls just not me.
I wave... nothing.
I laugh... nothing.
I stare... still... nothing.
He doesn't notice me. He never is. He never will.
I stop trying...
"Emily," I hear a soft, silky voice say.
I turn around seeing him. Seeing the one. Seeing someone I loved inside.

© Janet D., Marblehead, MA

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Just keep waiting... he'll see you someday.
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trytobepretty1 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 24 2009 at 12:56 am
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wow, i know just what you mean.

this is amazing, it gave me hope.
Inkspired PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 24 2009 at 12:18 am
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&quot;If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?&quot; - Mario Pei<br /> &quot;I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn&#039;t, I would die.&quot; Isaac Asimov

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LOVE IT!! It's so true, and the emotion is great!!