Suffering | Teen Ink


April 6, 2009
By qtepa2ti PLATINUM, Broomfield, Colorado
qtepa2ti PLATINUM, Broomfield, Colorado
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I thought I was over it,

this feeling of dread,

but the sad thoughts and feelings

won’t erase from my head.

I’ll keep faking my smile

day after day

too afraid to end it,

this game of life we all play.

I’ll hide in my music,

hide in my books,

keep emotions inside,

and hide from their looks.

Try to forget their judgments,

keep faith in my friends

and hope one day it’ll leave me,

and the suffering will end.

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on Oct. 5 2009 at 7:00 pm
AubreyTRieder PLATINUM, Clark, New Jersey
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i love this one so much, too! the rhyming is better for the most part but still watch out for it in the future...

the "feeling of dread" in the poem is so great that i got a nervous stomach ache while reading it! good job, and keeping writing!