Celestial | Teen Ink


December 28, 2010
By lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.


Celestials and their ancient legacy have disappeared with time's passing.
Summer is one of the last remaining Celestials in the entire land of King Lance and King Slade. Once she's discovered and brought before King Slade, her Element - Fire - is taken advantage of. While Summer's being juggled between two Kingdoms, no one notices as a third Kingdom arises.
And who is the King? Not a man. It's Summer's long lost mother.
Stuck in between the Kingdoms, it's up to Summer to decide the fate of all the Kingdoms - once and for all.



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on Oct. 21 2020 at 6:57 pm
WritingWatermelon, Niceville, Florida
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
There's a secret that real writers know that wannabe writers don't, and the secret is this: It's not the writing part that's hard. What's hard is sitting down to write. -Steven Pressfield

The moment I read this I was sucked in. It's not very often that I find something I love to read this much, amazing work!

fantasymeg said...
on Feb. 11 2020 at 11:27 am
fantasymeg, Ogden, Utah
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you can't fly, run. If you can't run, walk. If you can't walk, crawl. But by all means, keep moving.

I love this story! The way you describe it all, my vision of this story clear. I can't wait for you to bring more chapters. I can't to see how this story evolves. You have an awesome mind!

on Feb. 14 2014 at 3:43 am
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.

AUTHOR'S NOTE: Hi guys! Thank you all so much for reading and commenting on Celestial. Four years ago, this developing book was probably the dearest thing to me, and reading all your wonderful comments brings back some fond memories. So thank you.  For now, I'm sorry to say that Celestial is shelved. I'm hoping to focus my attention on shorter works and poems--one reason being that I'm now a junior in high school (finding spare time is rather difficult), and another being that I hope to diversify my work to different genres.  But thank you all for still reading Celestial! It constituted much of my late middle school life, and now I hope to further expand my writing repertoire--which you'll be able to read on my account soon, so check out those if you're interested!  Happy writing, Linda

on Dec. 13 2013 at 11:36 am
Jessica.Lowle BRONZE, Bremen, Indiana
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
May the Odds be Ever in Your Favor

Please tell me it isn't done! It's so good.

on Sep. 22 2013 at 9:49 am
AnInkling SILVER, Castle Rock, Colorado
6 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
“This is your life. Is it everything you dreamed that it would be, when the world was younger and you had everything to lose?” Switchfoot
“Have I now become your enemy by telling you the truth?” Galatians 4:16

I thought your book is very well writen, and keeps the reader interested! And I enjoyed it! However, the plot is now slighty stereo typical since "Hunger Games" has become a movie. Female hunter lives in a world that has been taken over by a dictator. While the celestials add a nice touch, and make her mother a rular will twist the plot nicely, you may consider giving Summer another occupation and giving the villiage its own "personality" to make your book less "typical". The only other thing is that, as I hunt myself, hunting in the middle of the day does not work-- no animals are out. Hunters have to hunt from about 5:00am to 10:00am at the latest, or 5:00 pm to last light. 

on Aug. 29 2013 at 12:51 pm
MyNameIsCookiePie BRONZE, Batesville, Indiana
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"You would have to take me for who I am"
~Harry Edward Styles

this is AMAZING

on Aug. 26 2013 at 9:20 am
Kestrel135 PLATINUM, Waterford, Connecticut
43 articles 0 photos 256 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Respect existence or expect resistance"

You have a good balance between dialogue and fluffy stuff and action. I like it! In fact, I love it... Please add more!!!!

on Jun. 11 2013 at 5:44 pm
kikixkupkake GOLD, San Marcos, California
17 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The things that walk out when we open our minds." -Dylan McCoy

pleaaaase add more!!

on May. 19 2013 at 12:48 pm
another_sky PLATINUM, Dallas, Texas
31 articles 8 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
“And once the storm is over, you won’t remember how you made it through, how you managed to survive. You won’t even be sure, whether the storm is really over. But one thing is certain. When you come out of the storm, you won’t be the same person who walked in. That’s what this storm’s all about.”
― Haruki Murakami

Please add more!!! I love this!

bellatrix said...
on Apr. 30 2013 at 4:52 pm
bellatrix, Alvin, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
the person you love should not be the one who harms you


artninja said...
on Apr. 29 2013 at 9:31 pm
:) Hi writesomethingawesome! It's KM from book club!

on Apr. 19 2013 at 4:03 pm
MeggieMills SILVER, Baltimore, Maryland
9 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
I write...so therefor I am a Writer.

Oh my God ! This novel is awesome and you should be a novelist when you finish college! I'M LOVING SUMMER ALREADY!!! 

Tman2 GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2013 at 5:20 pm
Tman2 GOLD, North Palm Beach, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 19 comments
Love book write more

DylanC said...
on Mar. 22 2013 at 10:56 pm
DylanC, Louisville, Kentucky
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on Mar. 15 2013 at 9:58 am
WannaBeWriter3, New Palestine, Indiana
0 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
live your life to the fullest....

i feel like a little kid asking for more candy but...... MORE!!!!!!! i really like it. the girl sor of gives me a katniss vibe

on Mar. 9 2013 at 3:53 pm
writesomethingalways PLATINUM, Pueblo West, Colorado
21 articles 7 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Either write something worth reading, or do something worth writing." ~Benjamin Franklin

This is great! I am writing a fantasy novel of my own right now, and I can only hope mine is as good as yours! You have wonderful descriptions! That's one of the things I struggle with, but hopefully by reading this I can learn a little and become better! Great job!

LuvLife said...
on Feb. 19 2013 at 2:47 pm
LuvLife, Sydney, California
0 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live the life you love, love the life you live!:)

Wow, stunning. So far the writing is stupendous. I know how hard it is to find time to write, but whenever you have the time, please write. You write write with fluency. Please. With a cherry on top, will you find time to write? Thx

ali123 said...
on Feb. 5 2013 at 10:50 am
i like the story it was good

ShyKarma GOLD said...
on Dec. 16 2012 at 4:38 pm
ShyKarma GOLD, Sedro Woolley, Washington
10 articles 10 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
when your in jail a good friend will be trying to bail you out. A best friend will be in the cell next to yours saying "Damn that was fun" - groucho marx

i really like this! I hope theres more soon.

The_Cheese said...
on Dec. 1 2012 at 1:54 pm
The_Cheese, Dalton, Georgia
0 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not worth living without three things, 1.Chocolate 2.Love and my personal favorite 3.Mistakes.

I just finished reading it. Please add more chapters!!!!