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Jane Doe

July 29, 2014
By ms.nerdalicious GOLD, Orlando, Florida
ms.nerdalicious GOLD, Orlando, Florida
16 articles 1 photo 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A bird doesn't sing because it has an answer, it sings because it has a song."
— Maya Angelou


Jane Doe had been living off of trashcans in an alleyway when Dr. Rollins found her. After that, she lived in a freaking castle, attending the world's most prestigious boarding school, and making friends who were just like her - supernatural. That all changed with the sudden appearance of Peter. A boy who seemed to know more about Jane than she did. A boy who seems determined to show Jane that all is not what it seems. But does Jane want to see?

Abigail H.

Jane Doe

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Madie2k BRONZE said...
on Aug. 9 2014 at 11:50 am
Madie2k BRONZE, Topeka, Kansas
2 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't the best of them bleed it out. While the rest of them Peter out." -Foo Fighters

I thought your story was very creative and I liked how you wrote the prologue, though I wish you had explained who Laura was, but maybe you wanted the readers to be left guessing. I also really liked the Voices and thier dialogue ect. But I was confused as to why Jane went back to the school. Was it to look for her Guardian? And when she got there why she went to the Headmaster's office. Overall though I thought it was well done. Keep posting!