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Quiet the Trees
March 15, 2013
Summary:
Oh you know how it happened.
The usual way, if that exists.
But that's the funny part. It does exist and we are living proof.
You know how it happened, my love. The usual way.
You know. Boy meets girl. Girl is shy. Boy is cool. Neither really care. I guess I can't say that. Maybe I should just tell you my side...
Apollo77
Quiet the Trees
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TaylorWintry DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 24 2013 at 5:37 pm
I agree with readaholic. While what you're writing is understandable, i feel like it's rambling a little tiny too much. The first chapter was a little over-the-top, but I can argue and say that it was for character development. You're great at that
readaholic PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 23 2013 at 3:39 pm
Your writing is very good, but the whole piece is just kind of flat. It starts to build a story when you talk about how you and Stephanie became friends, but then it's just describing how you're a social outcast (sorry, I mean "you' like the narrator of the story, not really "you" :)). So...I guess I'm just trying to say that there's not a lot of plot or build, but if you wrote more chapters it would pick up. I also find it odd how you begin to talk about Stephanie, then you and Stephanie, and then we're just back to you, like Stephanie didn't make any difference. I don't know, maybe I'm just babbling...But your writing style, fluency, and word choice is really good, the characters are nice, and it really is well written
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