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My Lost Thoughts

March 2, 2013
By SuzieQ777 GOLD, Franklin, Virginia
SuzieQ777 GOLD, Franklin, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;La Vida Es Bella&quot;<br /> -Me


I stared out the window at a bird perched in its nest, cranning its neck to keep leaves over her babies from being poured on by the rain. I looked up at the clouds, their gray forms blocking any evidence of the sun. I felt envious of the bird protecting her babies and the clouds doing their job. They knew what to do when things came their way. Unlike me. I don't know what to do, I thought. It seemed like that was the only sentence my mind could form. I don't know how many times I repeated it in my head as the slow day of school seem to pass by slower and slower every second. I felt like the clock over the teacher's desk read 3:00 for six hours staight. Would this day never end? Was I damned to live this day for the rest of my life. I don't know what to do, I thought again. I became angry with myself for rushing this day to be over. It wouldn't matter if this school day ended at 3:15 like it was suppose to or it never ended keeping me here forever. Because I still wouldn't know what to do, their just wasn't a solution to my situation. No answers to my questions, no reassurance, and no one could help. Including myslef.


The author's comments:
Wrote this in a time of feeling confused, lost, and scared. But all probelms tend to erase themselves soon enough. Then things always get better.

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on Mar. 13 2013 at 7:25 pm
emi_is_fab SILVER, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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I REALLY liked this peice it too reminded me of my own life in more ways than one I really enjoyed it. 

on Mar. 12 2013 at 6:01 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

i like it, it made me think of my life...

SuzieQ777 GOLD said...
on Mar. 12 2013 at 5:59 pm
SuzieQ777 GOLD, Franklin, Virginia
15 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;La Vida Es Bella&quot;<br /> -Me

thanks! =)

SuzieQ777 GOLD said...
on Mar. 12 2013 at 5:57 pm
SuzieQ777 GOLD, Franklin, Virginia
15 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;La Vida Es Bella&quot;<br /> -Me

thanks that was good advice :)  

on Mar. 12 2013 at 5:53 pm
BlackNether12, San Ignacio, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Try for the utmost, because you&#039;re worth no less - Jeremiah Ludwig.

Oh, and I LOVE that cover!

on Mar. 12 2013 at 5:52 pm
BlackNether12, San Ignacio, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Try for the utmost, because you&#039;re worth no less - Jeremiah Ludwig.

Ah, okay. So, someone other than me's having a slow day! Not Great >> Anyway, this sounded like my day, inc. Argh, you use 'day' too many times, repeating words . . . day, blah,blah,blah DAY!, blah,blah,blah DAAAAAAAAAY! . . . Get's kinda annoying. Ah, okay, when you're writing a personal experience thingy, it's really useful to put LOTS and LOTS of details! A reader want's details and they always, ALWAYS sound best when you put them in something like this.   Just a hint! Anyway, keep writing! :) ~Black~

on Mar. 12 2013 at 5:46 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!<br /> &quot;Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing&quot; Benjamin Franklin

I like the fact that you tie in the bird scene with how you are feeling. Nice job oh and like the pic :)