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Feedback on Amazing

March 1, 2016
By SnowflakeStar GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
SnowflakeStar GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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     "Amazing," a poem by Brigette Chenvert is a piece of writing that is, in one word, amazing. In this piece the author describes a place in which everything is natural and beautiful. The sights tht are described are percieved to be breathtaking and wonderous. Not only does this poem discuss this beauty, the author also gives adjectives to describe these beautiful places.

     This poem however is a very unique piece. According to "Amazing," by Brigette Chenvert it states "The trees, the seas, the lakeside breeze, the thrills the hills, the rocky land, untouched by man..." These ae just simple examples of nature's beauty, but the line "...untouched by man..." implies that these sights are pure and untainted by people. Nature should be left alone and its' beauty should be seen, but, "...my inspiration, my wonderful muse, the trees so green, the water so clean, silky leaves with sparkling sheen, for I think of the sights I'll never see, so great, so unreal, only seen in a dream."



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