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Feedback on "Just Be You"

December 3, 2014
By Impurial SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
Impurial SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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     "Just Be You" by Daniella Cressman had me thinking. Daniella's poem depicts how stereotypes can be misleading and often bring an individual to deeper confusion. The way she phrases and organizes the words in a rhyming fashion depict the stereotypes we all grew up in, and how it impacts the way we think.

     I didn't delve into the meaning of the poem at first, but when I decided to skim through the poems this one seemed to get me to return. As I reread it, I realized that Daniella captures the hard truths of being a stereotype as not necessarily a good thing. "Sleep soundly and pretend/ Pretend that we are the same." That line brought me to wonder about my past thoughts and how I, like many others, aspire to fit into society with the mold set for us. The opening line "Do you fit the stereotype?" also made me think about if I was truly living to what I - and society - wanted me to do. 

     Though I have thought about whether or not I really wanted to be who society wanted me to be, this poem made me wonder more - am I really pretending?



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on Jun. 27 2017 at 2:52 am
TravelerenRoute GOLD, Ribera, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate.<br /> Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure.<br /> <br /> It is our light, not our darkness, that most frightens us.<br /> We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant,<br /> gorgeous, handsome, talented and fabulous?<br /> <br /> Actually, who are you not to be?<br /> You are a child of God.<br /> <br /> Your playing small does not serve the world.<br /> There is nothing enlightened about shrinking<br /> so that other people won&#039;t feel insecure around you.<br /> We are all meant to shine, as children do.<br /> <br /> We were born to make manifest the glory of God within us.<br /> It is not just in some; it is in everyone.<br /> <br /> And, as we let our own light shine, we consciously give<br /> other people permission to do the same.<br /> As we are liberated from our fear,<br /> our presence automatically liberates others.&quot;<br /> Marianne Williamson

Hey there! I just came across this! That really means a lot to me! I am so glad you enjoyed my poem! Thanks for reading it and sharing your thoughts!