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Feedback on "Bubbles"

November 7, 2014
By Anonymous

     "Bubbles" by Tara Troiano is a beautiful poem which is hauntingly accurate. This piece of work is about someone who lives in a bubble, unaware of the world, until one day, they "pop." For just three lines, "Bubbles" describes feelings in a wonderful and relatable way.

     This poem is one I love so much because it is very difficult to capture a topic such as this and do it so perfectly. I was, at a time, in the very bubble in which the writer speaks of. Correlating with the poem again, I have popped, and was exposed to the real world. In the poem which was very well-written in particular was, "Now I've popped." This is because it was a sentence short and abrupt just as the popping she speaks of takes place. The poem "Bubbles" by Tara Troiano is an exceptional piece which flawlessly executes true emotion.



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