Teen Ink,
I really love your magazine! I especially like the article “How Important Is Beauty” by Sissy Sullivan because it really shows all girls that beauty is only skin deep. It also showed me that who you are is not about how beautiful you are or what clothes you wear, it’s about what you’re like on the inside. I thought mostly all of your magazine is wonderful, but there’s some things you could improve on. You should include dance more in the Sports Section, and show people dance is most definitely a sport. I would suggest putting an article in Teen Ink about what competitive dance is and what types of dance there are. I also think you should put in an article that talks positively about the bible or God. You could choose a very important lesson from the bible to go in Teen Ink.

Thank you for reading and I hope you take my opinions into consideration.