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The Note That Holds a Thousand Feelings

February 24, 2019
By delaney17 BRONZE, Defiance, Ohio
delaney17 BRONZE, Defiance, Ohio
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The writing titled “The Note That Holds a Thousand Feelings” written by Cecile, talks about a girl who doesn’t have a good father figure in her life. Her writing left me feeling sad but, I liked the way she wrote the story. When Cecille says, “You see, Dad it isn’t the note that brings me sadness it’s you” It adds to the sad tone of the story and it is a very strong point of the story. Also when she says, “I know you love me too, but your addiction to drugs will always mean more to you than your kids ever will” This is a very powerful sentence and it shows how her dad didn’t care for her or support her. This writing is interesting and delighting to read.



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