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Ramen

December 14, 2018
By abigail08j BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
abigail08j BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
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I wholeheartedly agree with Isabell, in Ramen, when she wrote about how she didn't know what to eat for lunch. "Should I order pizza?" and she decided no as well as roast beef. I sometimes have a hard time choosing what I want to eat because I tend to crave only one certain food and find everything else unnapealing, plus I love noodles. I also admire the way she used imagery to describe the noodles and the way she cooked them. After she had described I could practically flavor them in my mouth because she was able to describe them so well. I also like the way she said they can feel a food coma coming over them, because I believe everyone has felt that before at one point in their life.



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