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My Hair is Prettier than Yours

January 27, 2012
By FullPotential GOLD, Downingtown, Pennsylvania
FullPotential GOLD, Downingtown, Pennsylvania
12 articles 25 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Realism is an excuse for mediocrity.


"Your so ugly nobody can even look at you. It hurts their eyes!" She said to me. Then she threw her head back and laughed. Everyone laughed with her. I walked away. People pointed at me and laughed. I kept my head down. A paper airplane hit me in the head. I pretended I hadn't noticed. The kids on the bus insulted me just with their eyes. I read my book.

If you'll believe me, I'm actually very pretty. I have a pretty body, nice features, big eyes. But nobody can notice that. Because of my hair. It's not sleek and straight like everyone else's. It's untamable. It curls and frizzes and can't be pulled into a ponytail or pushed behind my ear. It's different. And they hate that.

I pulled my hair out of my face with a headband. My goal was to make eye contact with every person I passed.

Only four people would look me in the eye, and only one of them held it for more than a second. He locked eyes with me for five seconds. It may not sound long, but it felt like forever, especially since everyone else had averted their eyes.

They fidgeted with zippers and ponytails. They suddenly became very interested in their fingernails. Anything not to have to look me in the eye. Maybe she was right. It hurts them to look at me. But not because I'm ugly.

And when I was next to my locker and she came up and started making fun of my hair, I looked her in the eye. She faltered. All the kids around her averted their eyes. I heard their thoughts: Please don't look at me. Please don't.

“Worry about your own hair and leave mine alone,” I said to her. She blinked rapidly. Then I slammed my locker shut and stalked off towards science class. And just like a movie, they all stood there, not sure what had just happened.

Remember that old saying, “The eyes are the window to the soul”? They are. The one boy who held my gaze for five seconds learned more about me than any of the other students I was able to make eye contact with. And I understood him. Maybe the reason nobody else would look at me was because they were afraid I'd understand them. That they only want to fit in. That they don't want to become the next object of humiliation. That being popular is more important than being human.

By the way, McKenna, my hair is prettier than yours.


The author's comments:
I really don't care what they think about me anymore. Mainly because I feel in control when I try to look them in the eye. Maybe it's harder to insult someone when they're glaring at you instead of just taking it.

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on Jul. 27 2013 at 6:26 am
MayaBlue BRONZE, London, Other
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Words Create Worlds

Brilliant short story. I really enjoyed reading it.

on Apr. 2 2013 at 7:26 pm
bookmouse BRONZE, Chapel Hill, North Carolina
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Everyone else has straight hair?!?

on Dec. 22 2012 at 6:26 am
LinkinPark12 PLATINUM, Lincolnshire, Other
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Work like you don’t need money, love like you've never been hurt, and dance like no one's watching. ¦ I like change - but only when everything stays the same.

Cool message :3 I'm sorta jealous at how strong you are, I wish I didn't care what people thought. Great story!

on Oct. 17 2012 at 7:41 pm
FreeLOTR SILVER, Aurora, Indiana
7 articles 16 photos 23 comments

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"The biggest thing that man desires is power." -J.R.R. Tolkien.

THis is really good!!! I'm glad u showed them people. Bullies should all go fall off a cliff.

on Jun. 19 2012 at 5:54 am
Stand_Up BRONZE, Jensen Beach, Florida
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am neither somebody nor nobody, but myself plain and simple.

~ Who I Am (report that I wrote personally for school) by Alli Evans

Really good, and I love the ending haha!

Powerful message. The eyes truly are a window to the soul for alot of people. Great writing (: