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Heart

November 22, 2010
By TerraTAZz GOLD, Sapulpa, Oklahoma
TerraTAZz GOLD, Sapulpa, Oklahoma
18 articles 3 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody goes through life without a scar.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -carol burnett


What was she thinking leaving her cell phone at home? She never left home without it and now she was starting to believe she was lost. She was lost in the middle of the woods with no one to help her find her way.

She had walked ten miles in the wrong direction. She had been chasing her dog and made a wrong turn and now she was fighting frost bite in her fingers and toes. It was in the single digits that night and all she had on was her softball hoodie and sweat pants. She began calling out for her dog again, hoping that he would somehow find his way back to her and save her, but her destiny was already predestined.

she wasn't scared until she began hearing noises. The first was far off behind her. It sounded like a small animal rustling in the bushes. She put the thought of it being any danger to her out of her mind and sat against a tree. Her knees were aching and her feet her numb. The snow under her sweatpants began to melt. Her pants were wet in a matter of minutes, but she didn't have the energy to get back up.

She heard the noise again, this time much closer and much louder. For the first time she didn't feel alone anymore, however this feeling wasn't a comfort for her. She looked around for any sort of weapon to fight off whatever may come at her, but she saw nothing, but a white blanket of snow.

The noises grew louder and closer every minute that passed and she grew more scared by the second.
She knew whatever it was it would surly kill her for she was so exhausted she wouldn't put up much of a fight.

She was on the verge of tears when the noises abruptly stopped. Everything was silent expect her heavy breathing. She looked around, nothing was any different. Then she felt a gust of cold air and heard a thumping sound. As the noise began to get louder it started to resemble a heart beat. she knew nothing that loud could be her heart. Then the beat began to fade and as the beat faded she began to feel weak. As the beat began to become unaudible she knew what had come for her, the thing she had feared the most.... Death.



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TerraTAZz GOLD said...
on Nov. 30 2010 at 9:06 am
TerraTAZz GOLD, Sapulpa, Oklahoma
18 articles 3 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody goes through life without a scar.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -carol burnett

thank you :), yes i will

Lay18 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 29 2010 at 10:42 am
Lay18 PLATINUM, Portsmouth, Virginia
30 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live and Learn

You gave me chills!!!!!!! Keep writing.

Can you check out some of my work plz?


TerraTAZz GOLD said...
on Nov. 28 2010 at 11:48 pm
TerraTAZz GOLD, Sapulpa, Oklahoma
18 articles 3 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody goes through life without a scar.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -carol burnett

Glad you enjoyed! Thank you very much for commenting my work and for reading it!

TerraTAZz GOLD said...
on Nov. 28 2010 at 11:47 pm
TerraTAZz GOLD, Sapulpa, Oklahoma
18 articles 3 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody goes through life without a scar.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -carol burnett

:) thank you for commenting!

on Nov. 26 2010 at 8:45 pm
skyler_anne GOLD, Brewer, Maine
12 articles 6 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;what doesn&#039;t kill us only makes us stronger&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Meeting you was fate, becoming your friend was a choice, but falling in love with you I had no control over.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;To give anything less than your best is to sacrifice the gift.&rdquo; -Pre

This is great! so suspenseful. i loved it

on Nov. 25 2010 at 3:03 am
Sirenarose BRONZE, Sydney, Other
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Friendship is like peeing your self, everyone in the world can see it happening. But only you experience the warm feeling it brings.

Very surreal and suspenseful, i liked the build up of energy and i really liked the ending. Try a bit more imagery and  there are a few spelling mistakes, but over all i loved it!