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Gone With The WInd

August 25, 2009
By RLJoy DIAMOND, Glen Rock, New Jersey
RLJoy DIAMOND, Glen Rock, New Jersey
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As I glimpsed into his eyes I thought I knew it all...I thought I knew his story. When I looked into his hazel eyes, I saw green clouds, dissolving and saw him crystal clear... but what you think is not always what you get...

It all started when I was wandering outside my town. I drifted up towards a grassy hill and then sat down. I leaned on a tree trunk and slowly drifted into a trans...

All a sudden I felt two soft and very calm fingers touching my shoulder. As my eyes opened it felt as if someone was opening curtains because when I opened them all I could see was the relfection of his eyes and his red lips. Our eyes connected...as through it was meant to be... That moment I knew we were meant for each other...

As I opened my mouth to say something to him, The wind started to blow and all the leaves circled around him. As the wind slowly directed into a diffrent direction and blew away so did he.

I thought I knew him but now I don't know if it was a dream... Or I was imagining things...Or maybe he was there... Whatever it was, we were never meant to be because he is gone...forever



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RLJoy said...
on Oct. 18 2009 at 7:39 am
thanks for the advice

seapenguin said...
on Oct. 18 2009 at 2:21 am
seapenguin, Healdsburg, California
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Favorite Quote:
I'm a super hero, but with no powers or motivation.

hazel eyes* Oops. Typo. ^.^

seapenguin said...
on Oct. 18 2009 at 2:20 am
seapenguin, Healdsburg, California
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Favorite Quote:
I'm a super hero, but with no powers or motivation.

As I glimpsed into his eyes I thought I knew it all...I thought I knew his story. When I looked into his hazel -- You should probably take one of those out. Just a little advice. Your storyline is good. :) I really liked it. <3

RLJoy said...
on Oct. 3 2009 at 8:59 am
thanks for all the comments

on Oct. 3 2009 at 8:55 am
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

WOW, WOW, and WOW!!!

This one is definitely my favorite, and should be in the magazine. You really are a talented writer, and I'm so happy you commented on my story, because then I would never have been able to read you stories!!

Fantastic story, and I love how he was gone with the wind.

ThisIsAvital said...
on Sep. 30 2009 at 12:43 pm
Hi Raquel. ur riting is so amazing!!! i showed ziqian(my friend friend from school) and she thought it was AMAZING!!! i showed anna and she was impressed 2. face it. ur an awesome riter. btw in case u couldnt read the sceen name...its Avital. just a tip, all of its aamazing except that you spelled TRANCE rong. its trance not trans. haha its ok. i cood still read it. check out my stuff. one of my poems became popular, and has more than 100 veiw. also go onto NONFICTION then click MEMIORS. look for the one called MIRRIAM. so yeah. pls get ur friends 2 comment on my stuff. im depressed cuz i want comments. anyway...byeeeeee!!!!!!

RLJoy DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 25 2009 at 8:14 pm
RLJoy DIAMOND, Glen Rock, New Jersey
56 articles 0 photos 86 comments
thanks I apprecitethe comment

RLJoy DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 25 2009 at 8:06 pm
RLJoy DIAMOND, Glen Rock, New Jersey
56 articles 0 photos 86 comments
hi thanks for the comment

Ziqian Xu said...
on Sep. 25 2009 at 6:22 pm
Ziqian Xu, Fair Lawn, New Jersey
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Wow, that's magnificent! (oh, by the way, I'm Avital's friend)

kewl_critic said...
on Sep. 2 2009 at 1:42 am
omg its SOOOOOO amazing. i luv the ending were you dont no what happened. this is the best thing ive read on this website so far.