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The aliens of 61

October 28, 2019
By 347644 BRONZE, Cupertino, California
347644 BRONZE, Cupertino, California
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It was a cold, crisp Friday evening. Chris was just doing his homework in his room when he heard a metallic grinding noise outside. He decided to get up and check it out.  When he went outside there was a loud crashing noise. He also saw some sort of a flashing light coming from the end of the miles of cornfields. He sprinted through the miles of cornfields looking for the source of the sound. When he got tired, out of the corner of his eyes he saw a flash of light, near the end of the fields. He slowly sauntered over and prepared himself for what lay behind those patches. He opened it. His eyes GAZED in disbelief. The neighbors heard loud screams of agonizing pain, and then Chris was never seen again.


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I was closely experimenting with 3rd person as much as I could and wanted to submit this towards teen ink.


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