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Secret

September 26, 2009
By EternalMadness GOLD, Fresno, California
EternalMadness GOLD, Fresno, California
13 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
They say it's what you make
I say it's up to fate
It's woven in my soul
I need to let you go
Your eyes, they shine so bright
I want to save their light
I can't escape this now
Unless you show me how
When you feel my heat
Look into my eyes
It’s where my demons hide


“The way I see it, you have two choices.” He said declaratively “you can kiss me, He moved closer, or you can walk away and go your whole life wondering how it would be.” She smiled lightly and took a step toward him.
“The way I see it…” He waited “is that your right.” He was so close to her suddenly that her heart began to sputter and her blood boiled violently. She couldn’t keep her thoughts to herself and that intrigued him immensely.
“Your adorable cleare, you know I will never let you have the satisfaction of knowing how it is to be without me.” He smiled again and put his hands on both sides of her face, bending down to kiss her. The kiss started off normal the way a kiss normally does when it’s the first, but once she met his lips with hers she couldn’t help but take a breath and that drove him wild. He pulled her toward him swiftly and they were molded into each other. There was so much heat, so much passion that the air around them got hot and muggy though it was the middle of winter in the little Chicago town. He let her go and held her an inch away from him. Her eyes were glowing and he could tell she wanted nothing more than to stay with him as long as she could.
“I really wish you wouldn’t read my mind Jake” she breathed. “It’s intimidating.”
Cleare and Jake had known each other since 4th grade and ever since then they had been inseparable and together. Now it was junior year and they could no longer resist the temptation between them, But Jake had a secret. A secret worse than that of what Cleare knew. She loved him so much and he loved her, but will this secret rip them apart?



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on Oct. 14 2009 at 12:29 pm
priscilla kirk, Hindsville, Arkansas
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that is aaamazing omg so awesome, luved it!!

eMiLyP GOLD said...
on Oct. 14 2009 at 11:56 am
eMiLyP GOLD, Jeannette, Pennsylvania
13 articles 6 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is short; speak your mind, say what ya wanna say, and do what ya wanna do (as long as you don't get caught!).

I'll be sure to do that!

on Oct. 14 2009 at 11:48 am
<3Vballismylife<3 BRONZE, Arlington Heights, Illinois
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WOW such a great story! I love it!!! Please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Oct. 13 2009 at 6:47 pm
EternalMadness GOLD, Fresno, California
13 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
They say it's what you make
I say it's up to fate
It's woven in my soul
I need to let you go
Your eyes, they shine so bright
I want to save their light
I can't escape this now
Unless you show me how
When you feel my heat
Look into my eyes
It’s where my demons hide

Dont worry, more is coming :p read my other stuff too! comment and rate as well thanks for all your comments everybody! much love!

on Oct. 13 2009 at 5:17 pm
SilverAngel SILVER, West Carollton, Ohio
8 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is an open book, we take the journey until the end." ~Me

AHHHHHHH! Please write more!!!

on Oct. 10 2009 at 10:04 pm
booksarelife4me SILVER, Lutherville, Maryland
6 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Forgive and Forget and Never Regret."~A old friend

THanks for all your comments!!! And no your stories are amazing!!!! Better then mine truly! I will reply to the rest later right now i have to be going oh and btw this is an amazing story! very cute!

on Oct. 10 2009 at 6:13 pm
EternalMadness GOLD, Fresno, California
13 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
They say it's what you make
I say it's up to fate
It's woven in my soul
I need to let you go
Your eyes, they shine so bright
I want to save their light
I can't escape this now
Unless you show me how
When you feel my heat
Look into my eyes
It’s where my demons hide

Don't worry there will definitely be more :] Im just waiting to see how many people actually like it enough to comment before i post it on here. just keep checking back though :P and read my other stuff as well!

on Oct. 10 2009 at 5:23 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

Wow! Amazing!

I definitely want to keep reading!

Keep up the good work!

Can't wait to see more!!!

on Oct. 10 2009 at 1:31 am
EternalMadness GOLD, Fresno, California
13 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
They say it's what you make
I say it's up to fate
It's woven in my soul
I need to let you go
Your eyes, they shine so bright
I want to save their light
I can't escape this now
Unless you show me how
When you feel my heat
Look into my eyes
It’s where my demons hide

THank you so much :] read my other things as well!!

eMiLyP GOLD said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 6:35 pm
eMiLyP GOLD, Jeannette, Pennsylvania
13 articles 6 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is short; speak your mind, say what ya wanna say, and do what ya wanna do (as long as you don't get caught!).

I loved this article! It was so awesome and sweet. I liked how you ended in a question; it made me want to keep on reading! You're a great writer.

-Emily