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He & She

November 30, 2022
By Selina_lay061008 GOLD, Shenzhen, Other
Selina_lay061008 GOLD, Shenzhen, Other
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Facing the stadium that became complete ruins, he sat down on a piece of broken rock. 'It was a great time, when she was still here, when they were all here,' he sat there and muttered to himself. She used to make soup for him, with the warm smells floating all around the room.

 

---Description the environment:‘complete ruins’, ‘broken rock’ indicates that this place isn’t in a good condition, that it was full of fragments of things none of the whole and fine.

---Use the word ‘muttered’ to stress this lonely feeling. Nobody to speak to, mutter his thoughts to himself. Stress that ‘she was gone’ and ‘they’re all gone.’


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