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Good bye

January 23, 2019
By ty2kbob BRONZE, Monmouth, Oregon
ty2kbob BRONZE, Monmouth, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
¨Words are our most powerful source of magic, capable of both causing pain and healing it.¨

I loved someone and she loved me, but one day, she got terribly ill. She could not sleep, She could not eat. She could only lay in bed and weep. She could only lay in bed in pain. But one day, she whispered to me ¨ I love you. Always remember me. ¨ Then she passed away. She looked so peaceful. All I felt was pain, pain in my heart. Pain everywhere.

The next day, I was at her funeral. I walked outside, and wept. I could not stop. I decided to end it, I could not live one more minute without her I want to be with her again. I grabbed a knife, and plunged it right into my heart. I felt relief, I didn't feel pain at all. Just relief

Later that day, after the funeral, people walked outside. One child saw the body first, she screamed in horror. ¨MOMMY, DADDY, LOOK!¨  

My last words were¨Goodbye.¨

The author's comments:

This story was made just made so you could feel how people feel when they lose someone they loved.

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Slithery said...
on Dec. 29 2019 at 2:03 am
Slithery, Bend, Oregon
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stars need darkness to shine bright.

That’s SAD. But I love it soo much. Make more make more!